Carpon Sunda : "Kereteg Hate"

Hai semua,, ini carpon buatan admin Bank Of Science sendiri loh tapi dalam bahasa sunda, jika ada yang tidak mengerti bahasa nya boleh di tanyakan. Terimakasih, semoga dapat menghibur.





Cahaya bentang pating gurilap, bulan imut ngagelenyu ninggali kuring keur diuk di jandela kamar bari ngainghak ceurik, angina ngahiliwir karasa tiis, peuting ieu bet meuni asa endah katempona, tapi kunaon hate kuring bet meuni asa ripuh, rasa kaambek geus pinuh na ubun-ubun, kuring haying ngambek tapi teu bias, meureun kusabab kuring awewe jadi naluri kuring leuwih gede tibatan rasa amarah. Sarebu tanya minuhan pikiran kuring, naha bet ibu sareng bapa jadi teu ngawidian kuring ngilu pasanggiri eta, teu pira ngan saukur nulis jeung mikir, asa ku araraneh. Leuheung lamun diulahkeunnana the mun  kuring ngilu pasanggiri model anu gutak gitek di catwalk, kuring ge rada kaharti mun kitu mah, mung ieu mah aduh… ah pararusing, dug sek kuring ngarungkup dina simut.

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“Teh gugah atos siang” kadenge sora indung  kuring ngagero bari ngetrokan panto, kuring ngaleret  kana jam, “Aduh jam 05.00” kuring reuwas, henteu biasana kuring hudang sabeurang kieu kuring nangtung tur muka panto bari wegah mun kuring  keur teu solat jeung sakola mah mereun kuring moal kaluar ti kamar sapopoe, arek jadi nyi komar we ha,ha. Kuring kaluar ti kamar tungkul bari jamedud, “Cu, kunaon bageur meuni jamedud kitu?” pok bapa kuring nanya, kuring ngan saukur imut ngagelenyu bari wegah, “Neng geulis, ibu mah teu ngawidian teh lain ulah tapi ibu nyaah sieun Neng kunanaon, apan Neng teh anak nu dipika deudeuh ku ibu sareng bapa jadi mataksieun lamun aya nanaon mangkaning Jogjakarta teh lain tempat anu deukeut”. Indung kuring ngadeukeutan bari ramisak ceurik, hal anu teu bias ku kuring ditempo teh nyaeta nempo ibu jeung bapa kuring ngaluarkeun cimata. Kuring nangkeup indung kuring tur pok ngomong “Ibu, Neng moal ngiring upami ibu sareng bapa teu ngawidian mah, hampura Neng tos salah paham ka ibu sareng bapa”. Kuring ngilu ceurik nginghak “Jung cu, jung bapa sareng ibu ngawidian demi kasuksesan Neng, doa ibu sareng bapa aya dina tiap langkah Neng”. Kuring bingah, kuring jangji moal ngecewakeun ibu sareng bapa, kuring pasti berjuang.
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Braaaak… kadenge aya nu ngebragkeun meja “Nisaaaaa….kerjakeun soal dihareup, ngalamun wae” kuring reuwas, katempo dosen kuring geus nangtung hareupeun kuring bari melak cangkeng, kuring karek nyadar yen tadi kuring keur ulin ka hayalan jaman baheula basa kuring SMA, ayeuna kuring geus jadi panulis, 3 novel jeung 1 kumpulan carpon kuring geus di publikasikeun jeung meunang respon anu alus ti masarakat. Kuring Annisa, umur kuring ayeuna 20 taun, kuring kuliah di salah sahiji universitas di kota Bandung jurusan Sastra jeung Bahasa semester 4. “Nisaaa hayoh kahareup cicing wae !” dosen kuring ngambek, kuring buru-buru ngajawab bari tungkul sieun “Tapi pa, kuring teu acan paham” ayeuna dosen kuring ngaleret ka sakabeh murid nu aya di kelas “Sok, saha anu arek ngabantuan Nisa ngerjakeun soal di hareup?” tantang dosen eta, jep sakabeh murid jempling “Kuring Pa” ceuk hiji sora ti tukang, kuring ngaleret ka tukang wahh… saha eta  anu arek ngabela kuring, aya rasa atoh dina hate kuring sabab kuring aya nu ngabela. Sangges kajadian eta kuring jadi deukeut jeung jalma anu ngabelaan kuring kamari, jalma eta teh ngarana Sam, biasa di sebut kitu tapi ngaran aslina mah Samuel cenah.

          Jadwal kuliah geus beres, kuring buru-buru rek balik tapi pas rek kaluar gerbang kampus, breeeetttt,, hujan gede jadi kapaksa kuring ngiuhan heula, muga we hujanna sakeudueng, “Nisa…” kuring reuwas, aya anu nepak taktak kuring, “Eh” kuring ngereret “Ah, Sam geuning, aya naon?” kuring bingung nempo manehna aya didieu oge, “Gak apa-apa ko Sa he,he” manehna imut, aduh meuni lucu katinggalina, aduh kuring mikir naon sih, entong kitu Nisa hayoh istigfar. Sam lain asli urang Sunda, manehna katurunan Tionghoa jadi teu aneh lamun panonna rada sipit tur kulitna bodas, manehna can rada bentes ngomong sunda jadi bahasana sakapeung campuran, Indonesia jeung sunda. Kadenge sora adan ngumandang kuring niat arek solat heula bari nungguan hujan, “Eh Sam, punten Nisa bade awoh ashar heula nya ka masjid” kuring ngaleos ninggalkeun Sam anu katempona rada bingung ngartikeun omongan kuring bieu.

Di mesjid kampus
“Assalamualaikum wr.wb” astagfirullah, kuring ngajenghak reuwas pas salam kadua tanda beres solat pameunteu kuring pasangrok jeung pameunteuna Sam, aduh ti iraha budak ieu di dieu, ;’Haaah, Sam ngareureuwas” kuring ngagebug leungeunna “Sam terang timana Nisa aya di dieu? aduh make kadieu sih ieu budak pan ieu mah tempat khusus akhwat” kuring ngomong bari nyiwit pipina “Aduh Nisa sakit” ceuk manehna bari ngusap pipina nau di ciwit bieu ku kuring, kuring ngan bisa seuseurian nempo manehna nyerieun, ha,ha.. “Nisaa kamu lagi apa tadi? Ko pake baju putih kaya pocong aja, hi,hi” manehna nanya bari ngeleg “Ih Sam, (kuring jamedud) tadi kuring solat, solat teh ibadah anu wajib di laksanakeun ku sakabeh umat muslim, kin cerita lengkepna di jalan we nya isin di dieu mah seueur jalmi” kuring jeung Sam tuluy indit kaluar. Loba pisan pertanyaan anu di ajukeun ku manehna ka kuring soal agama, kuring malum da kuring jeung manehna mah beda agama, agama manehna mah keristen.

          Lila beuki lila kuring jadi deukeut jeung manehna, aya rasa anu beda dina hate Lmun kuring ninggali raray na, kuring bingung rasa naon eta, nu jelas rasa ieu hoyang pisan lamun nempo manehna bagja. Kuring leumpang ka kelas bari ngabogaan rasa bagja, sabab rek papanggih jeung pujaan hate anu dipikaheman geus saminggu kuring teu papanggih jeung manehna, sugan we poe ieu mah aya. Satepina di kelas, kuring lurat-leret ka sakuriling kelas tapi teu katempo anu di tutungguan teh, ah meureun can datang hate kuring ngabatin. Bet aya rasa karingrang ngarungkupan. Kaluar ti kelas, kuring buru-buru ka kost an, jarak ti tempat kuliah ka kost an kuring teh deukeut. Jadi, bisa kalampah ngan saukur ku leumpang. Rencana na ti kost an kuring rek neang Sam ka imah na, sieun aya kajadian nu teu dipikahayang nimpa ka manehna, das sms kuring teu di bales, telepon oge teu di angkat.

          Tok,tok,tok…“Punten” kuring ngetrok panto bari ngagero, kadenge panto dibuka “Iya, eh ini Neng Nisa ya? mari masuk” ceuk nu muka panto ramah, haaaah kuring reuwas, naha anjeunna nyaho yen kuring teh Nisa apan kuring  teu  acan pernah kadie, nyaho imahna ge  karek bieu ti babaturan kuring. “Oh muhun” kuring ngan saukur bisa imut tapi hate mah ringrang maratan langit, tuluy kuring asup bari olohok waah.. bener ieu teh imah Sam aduh gede pisan subhanallah kawas istana, “Neng Nisa silahkan duduk, sebentar bibi panggilkan dulu ibunya” oh jadi eta pembantuna, tapi dangdananna keren kos lain pembantu, tuluy pembantu eta indit. Teu kungsi lila, “Assalamualaikum” katinggali aya awewe saumuran indung kuring nangtung di hareupeun kuring “Waalaikumsalam” buru-buru kuring ngajawab “Oh ini Nisa ya? Samuel sering cerita tentang Nisa, katanya Nisa baik,cantik, keliatannya Sam sayang sekali sama Nisa, kalau Nisa gimana sama Sam?” kuring reuwas maratan langit, ieu indungna Sam? Haah.. naha make kerudung apan keluargana Sam agamana keristen, kuring masih keneh bingung tur ngajawab “Muhun ibu, Nis age nyaah (jawab kuring bari lingsem) ehm, punten ibu upami Sam kamana atos 7 dinten teu lebet ka kuliah?” ngadenge pertanyaan eta indungna Sam cicing, wah aya naon ieu kuring sieun,rasa ringrang balik ngarungkupan kuring, aya naon? Sarebu tanya jeung kasieun minuhan pikiran kuring. “Nisa ayo ikut ibu, ada sesuatu yang mau ibu tunjukkan tapi ibu gak bias bilang sekarang” indung Sam langsung nangkeup kuring, kuring teu ngarti naon maksudna tuluy indungna pok ngomong “Terimakasih ya sayang” cimata langsung ngucur ti mata indung Sam. Sam? kamana anjeun?

          Sapaparat jalan kuring ngan bisa tungkul sabari maca kalimah kalimah zikir, sakapeung indungna Sam nyekel leungeun kuring tanda nenangkeun. “Nisa kita sudah sampai” kuring beunta tuluy luak lieuk kasakuriling tempat eta, naha indung Sam ngajak kuring ka pasantren kieu, kuring leumpang nuturkeun indungna Sam, indungna Sam ngetrok ka hiji panto, bray panto eta di buka, kuring olohok kasengsem “Sam” bener anu diuk eta Sam? subhanallah kasep pisan, manehna make gamis jeung peci bodas meuni rapih katinggalna, “Nisa” indungna Sam ngagupayan ngajak diuk ka kuring tuluy indungna Sam nyaritakeun naha Sam bet aya di dieu, manehna jeung kulawargana ayeuna geus islam, subhanallah kuring bingah kabina bina, saurna Sam berubah gara-gara kuring, Sam nyaah pisan ka kuring, kulawargana ge teu nentang basa Sam mutuskeun rek asup islam malah kulawargana ngilu asup islam.

          Di taman kawasan pasantren eta kuring leuleumpangan jeung Sam, aduh kuring teu kiceup kiceup nempo dirina subhanallah sababaraha kali kuring ngucap kalimah eta (aduh kuring meuni sungguh terlalu ha,ha) di tengah tengan jalan Sam  ngeureunkeun leumpangna tuluy malik neteup kuring, kuring asa risih di kitukeun ku manehna “Nisa ayeuna urang tos saagama, Nisa hoyong teu jadi bidadari anu maturan hirup Sam salilana dunia sarta aherat?” kuring lingsem tanda satuju.


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